Today, year-end party (and Xmas party) was held in the laboratory o...

Dec 22, 2014 23:59
Today, year-end party (and Xmas party) was held in the laboratory of our university.

We bought ingredients for the party at the evening, and then cooked takoyaki.

Takoyaki is a ball shaped food made from cake flour, eggs, cabbage, green onion, pickled ginger and octopus(called tako).

Takoyaki is very yummy and we all love takoyaki.

I think almost all of the Japanese people like takoyaki.

We made about 100 pieces of takoyaki today, and I ate about 20.

I enjoyed wine, cake, yakitori(means baked chicken), and takoyaki while watching a movie with my colleagues.

But I can't go home tonight because I can't drive a car to go my home.

Good night.
今日、忘年会件クリスマスパーティが大学の研究室で開かれました。

私達は夕方にパーティのための食材を買って、たこ焼きを作りました。

たこ焼きは薄力粉、卵、キャベツ、ネギ、紅しょうが、そしてタコで作られるボール状の食べ物です。

たこ焼きはとても美味しく、我々は皆たこ焼きが大好きです。

私はほとんどの日本人がたこ焼きを好きだと思っています。

今日、我々は約100個のたこ焼きを作り、私は20個食べました。

私は同僚と映画を見ながら、ワインとケーキ、焼き鳥とたこ焼きを楽しみました。

しかし今日は車に乗れないので、私は家に帰ることができません。

おやすみなさい。
No. 1 Notters's correction
  • Today, year-end party (and Xmas party) was held in the laboratory of our university.
  • Today, a/the year-end party (and Xmas party) was held in the laboratory of our university.
  • We bought ingredients for the party at the evening, and then cooked takoyaki.
  • We bought ingredients for the party at in the evening, and then cooked takoyaki.
  • Takoyaki is a ball shaped food made from cake flour, eggs, cabbage, green onion, pickled ginger and octopus(called tako).
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Takoyaki is very yummy and we all love takoyaki.
  • Takoyaki is very yummy and we all love it takoyaki.
  • I think almost all of the Japanese people like takoyaki.
  • I think almost all of the Japanese people like takoyaki.
  • We made about 100 pieces of takoyaki today, and I ate about 20.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I enjoyed wine, cake, yakitori(means baked chicken), and takoyaki while watching a movie with my colleagues.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • But I can't go home tonight because I can't drive a car to go my home.
  • But I can't go home tonight because I can't drive a car to get there go my home.
  • Good night.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you! (^-^) I want to master pronouns.
No. 2 Timmy's correction
  • We bought ingredients for the party at the evening, and then cooked takoyaki.
  • We bought ingredients for the party in the evening, and then cooked (or: made some) takoyaki.
  • Takoyaki is a ball shaped food made from cake flour, eggs, cabbage, green onion, pickled ginger and octopus(called tako).
  • Takoyaki is a ball shaped food made from cake flour, eggs, cabbage, green onion, pickled ginger and octopus (which is called tako in Japanese).
  • I enjoyed wine, cake, yakitori(means baked chicken), and takoyaki while watching a movie with my colleagues.
  • I enjoyed wine, cake, yakitori (means (or: literally) baked chicken), and takoyaki while watching a movie with my colleagues.
。。。φ”( ̄_ ̄*)タコヤキクルクル
kanotown
Thank you again! クルクル!!Yes!!クルクル楽しい(*^o^*)
Timmy
You are welcome!
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